Colour – Dorethea Mackellar
This poem is about a girl who never really saw true colour before, however she catches a glimpse of colour and will never let it go. Throughout this poem she goes onto explain how colour is in the world around you. “The lovely things that I have watched unthinking unknowing day by day………. that will not pass away,” shows the change the girl went through and how she was oblivious as to what she was missing.
The purpose of this poem is to show how wonderful the world around us and colour is. Another purpose of this poem is to show the change in people can also influence they look at the world. “Who gave this gift of colour, which who shall seek shall find,” shows that only those who seek to change will change.
The emotion of this poem portrays is wonder and loving. It makes the reader feel happy and in awe of what is actually around us. “That their soft dyes have seeped my soul in colour,” makes the reader feel slightly sad at what the person has missed for so long yet happy and glad that she has found colour.
This is an eight free verse stanza construction. There are no real interesting features that influence the structure of this poem. Enjambments’ and commas allow for the flow of words. The poet’s choices of words are enticing yet accurate. Words and phrases such as hillsides golden-green and soothed eyes are examples of how the word choice and descriptiveness of these words and phrases create image and rhythm that contribute to show how wonderful and colourful the world we live in is. The image presented in this poem change in each stanza; however each image relates to the next one through colours, gems and landscapes. “Almond trees in bloom and oleanders, or a wide purple sea,” shows that different colours relate to different scenery, showing that the world is colourful and changes in texture and appearance from a trees and flowers to the vast ocean. Rhythm in this poem makes the poem slow, floating and enticing. The rhythm does not change throughout this poem and by not changing the rhythm it completes the style of the poem. The slow movement of the poem adds to the scene and theme. Although alliteration is present in this poem it does not influence the theme or mood of this poem.
In summary this poem is well constructed and portrays a message which other poets have tried to compose but have never been able to accomplish what this poet has. This poem has achieved what the poet aimed to achieve, which was to portray that the world is wonderful and full of colour but if you don’t open your eyes you’re never going to see what god made for you.